Javier, Your idea was great! You had great execution in explaining your idea to any future investors or business partners. I like that your service specifically targets the motorcyclist community of consumers, which often isn't reached. I was impressed with your confidence in presenting your idea to the listener and I found your consistent use of gestures and body language to be very convincing. Great job!
I like the pitch! Obviously it can be more polished as you practice it and develop your plans, but I really liked the way you talked with your hands and kept your face expressive. One thing I noticed is that you touched your face a couple times, which the audience can interpret it as a sign of nervousness or lack of confidence.
Hi Javier, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch! I was impressed by your opening sentence, it was really engaging. You used hand movements and showed a lot of emotion while presenting your elevator pitch. Your presentation was very natural and it did not seem rehearsed, I felt like we were having a conversation. You can improve, by practicing the speech more and a different camera angle as well. Overall, great post!
Javier,
ReplyDeleteYour idea was great! You had great execution in explaining your idea to any future investors or business partners. I like that your service specifically targets the motorcyclist community of consumers, which often isn't reached. I was impressed with your confidence in presenting your idea to the listener and I found your consistent use of gestures and body language to be very convincing. Great job!
Hey Javier,
ReplyDeleteI like the pitch! Obviously it can be more polished as you practice it and develop your plans, but I really liked the way you talked with your hands and kept your face expressive. One thing I noticed is that you touched your face a couple times, which the audience can interpret it as a sign of nervousness or lack of confidence.
Hi Javier,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch! I was impressed by your opening sentence, it was really engaging. You used hand movements and showed a lot of emotion while presenting your elevator pitch. Your presentation was very natural and it did not seem rehearsed, I felt like we were having a conversation. You can improve, by practicing the speech more and a different camera angle as well. Overall, great post!