As I did not receive much feedback, I was only based on the few comments I had on the previous one. I could see the camera more, I could have the strength to pronounce my words well. This was very different from the first video since in the first video I felt very nervous and this affected my pronunciation. Likewise, I was more fluid and felt more secure.
Thursday, July 16, 2020
Elevator Pitch 3
As I did not receive much feedback, I was only based on the few comments I had on the previous one. I could see the camera more, I could have the strength to pronounce my words well. This was very different from the first video since in the first video I felt very nervous and this affected my pronunciation. Likewise, I was more fluid and felt more secure.
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Hi Javier,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with your pitch! One thing I would recommend to help you out would maybe be to write a script beforehand. By doing this I think you could place it behind the camera even and read off it while recording! Also, it was cool to hear about your product from the perspective of another country! I can tell you’ve made progress on your idea!
Hey Javier, I like the pitch. It differently flowed better and you did seem more confident. In terms of constructive criticism I would work on maintaining eye contact with the audience, as turning side to side can make it look like the pitch doesn’t have your full attention. I’d also try filming from a fixed position because the swaying might distract people.
ReplyDeleteHi Javier,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch! I would advise that you stay looking confident by keeping focus on the audience when you speak. That will help keep them interested and intrigued. Good job overall!